What do you think of this song i wrote?

It's a great song but for one even after he knows you he still shouldn't judge because as long as your being yourself your doing good. The only reason people judge is because they see different people or they get jealous. It doesn't really have any structure like a real song. It's like a long poem. It' sounds kind of angry but not deep anger. more like a tantrum and you should come up with some different words. it's kind of repetitive. No offense though its really good. I give you a 6 or 7.